Good to see some progress being made here in terms of filming footage but also editing it into your film opening. The chase is generally well-created in that it makes sense and is logical in it's editing plus there are a couple of nice shots that make it stand out as being interesting to watch, rather than just the same camera angles ever time. To improve: your initial few shots need much more pace adding to them; the shot walking towards school is very long and should be either cut right down or should have a different range of shots and angles added in to it (such as shots of feet as they walk, over the shoulder shots, maybe even the character walking toward the character and then over/under it) to make it more interesting to watch. Also, your genre isn't especially clear at the moment. You need to identify some key aspects of your chosen genre and include them as much as possible in your film opening to make it clear that you understand the genre. This can be easily achieved with editing and choice of music/sound effects. Finally, there needs to be a clear display of group work in either the video, the editing and/or the blog posts. At the moment, there simply isn't and your group work needs to be much more visible.
Good to see some progress being made here in terms of filming footage but also editing it into your film opening. The chase is generally well-created in that it makes sense and is logical in it's editing plus there are a couple of nice shots that make it stand out as being interesting to watch, rather than just the same camera angles ever time.
ReplyDeleteTo improve: your initial few shots need much more pace adding to them; the shot walking towards school is very long and should be either cut right down or should have a different range of shots and angles added in to it (such as shots of feet as they walk, over the shoulder shots, maybe even the character walking toward the character and then over/under it) to make it more interesting to watch. Also, your genre isn't especially clear at the moment. You need to identify some key aspects of your chosen genre and include them as much as possible in your film opening to make it clear that you understand the genre. This can be easily achieved with editing and choice of music/sound effects.
Finally, there needs to be a clear display of group work in either the video, the editing and/or the blog posts. At the moment, there simply isn't and your group work needs to be much more visible.